Finlay's 100 word challenge

We have now started to complete the 100 word challenge. The prompt for this week was:

Here is Finlay's entry: It was a wet, soggy and rainy day and the drain was looking like fun. She decided to go next to it thinking something would happen. Suddenly it came up and landed down on her. Oh how worried she was. The look on her face! How she drowned like a fish begging for its prey. Her feet on top of the water. As she floated in the water. She slowly suffocated as her lips dried.