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Monday 30 September 2013

Cole's 5 sentence challenge

The trip to the moon was epic but it was long. There was magical starts so I reached out and caught one. I gazed at the small, beautiful, magical star. I finally reached the fabulous big moon. Everyone bounced around the moon, lastly I had to go back home.
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5 comments:

  1. Lola2 October 2013 at 10:03

    well done Cole that is fantastic

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  2. Lydia ash class4 October 2013 at 06:22

    hi this is lydia in ash.this is fantastic next time check your spellings

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  3. Abi from Ash class4 October 2013 at 09:18

    Well done. There are only a few mistakes. Great work.

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  4. amelie and lola15 October 2013 at 03:55

    well done cole

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  5. james15 October 2013 at 11:28

    I love your 5 sentence challenge cole

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