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Monday 30 September 2013

Meg's 5 sentence challenge

I was walking along the street then I stepped on something, it was a ticket to the moon! Four days later I was on the moon-it felt like I was standing on a huge rock, I even had a picnic. Meanwhile my mum was wondering where I was. We went back and halfway there we fell and fell and landed in my house. I loved my trip to the moon.
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 October 2013 at 10:23

    well done meg its great

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  2. Anonymous1 October 2013 at 12:18

    Well done Meg! This is fantastic.

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  3. Lola2 October 2013 at 10:03

    well done meg that is fantastic.

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  4. nikola from ash4 October 2013 at 06:28

    super moo

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  5. Abi from Ash class4 October 2013 at 09:16

    Well done.They are really good five sentences! It's brilliant how you've got everything right. It's like your in year six all ready. Keep up the good work!

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  6. lola and nancy15 February 2014 at 05:02

    that is so so amazing mega

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