Wednesday 9 October 2013
Charlie S' 5 sentence challenge!
As the silver snake was sliding through the green leaves he saw a man eating sausages on a grey rock, the man smiled at the snake, the snake looked angry. The man said to the snake "Do you want any sausages?"
"No," said the snake crossly and the snake slid away. Suddenly he heard a noise, quickly he got into some bushes to hide from a massive lion. The lion didn't see him in the prickly bush, he slid out of the bush and slid back home to his little hut far away from the jungle, but the man was still in the jungle!
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well done charlie that is amazing
ReplyDeleteI like your 5 sentence challange
ReplyDeleteYour 5 sentence challenge was brilliant Charlie and I liked how you used your imagination as well.
ReplyDeleteHello Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed with the quality of your five sentences for the 5SC. Your story would have been well suited for entry into the 100WC for more advanced writers. Have you tried entering the 100WC?
Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Well done Charlie, fantastic work.
ReplyDeletewell done Charlie I love your 100 challinge from Kristian
ReplyDeletewell done Charlie god story
ReplyDeleteHello Charlie
ReplyDeleteGreat work! and I can tell you have thought about what you have written there and you used all of the S words in your story. - Super Maybe you could try the 100WC as I think you would be great at it. I wonder what happened to the man that was still in the jungle? Maybe your friends could comment on what they think happened to the man?
Mr Norman
Team 5SC