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Wednesday 9 October 2013

Daisy's 5 sentence challenge

This week we had to include the words 'silly, silver, snake, sausages and smiled' in our writing... "What's for tea Mum?" asked Lucy. "Sausages are tonight darling!" replied Mum. Lucy and Mum were walking in the jungle. "Look Mum!" shouted Lucy clearly, "there's a silver, silly snake!" Lucy was at school, everyone was in the hall for the school photo. Everyone said "Cheese!" as they smiled. One day, three silly monkeys were eating bananas! "These bananas are yummy!" said one. "They sure are," replied another. One dinner time a snake that was silver was eating sausages!
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4 comments:

  1. Lola9 October 2013 at 10:24

    well done daisy that is amazing

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  2. Anonymous9 October 2013 at 13:44

    Hello Daisy.
    Well done for entering this week's 5SC. It's a lovely story about the snake, the sausages, the photo and the monkeys! I love your speech marks, wow words and connectives. When you enter this Challenge, you must only type five sentences!

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  3. Aliisha10 October 2013 at 06:29

    i like your 5 sentence challenge it is amazing

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  4. Anonymous20 October 2013 at 18:57

    Hello Daisy

    Well done you work is great and you have used all of the five S words in your story's I liked how you used three of the S words 2 times great work. I hope your mum didn't mind seeing the snake in the jungle. Have you tired doing the 100WC?

    Mr Norman
    Team 5SC

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