Wednesday 29 January 2014
Abigayle's 100 word challenge
A long time ago there lived a pink gorilla and a little girl called Amelie. Amelie laughed as she rode on her bicycle, which was grand and pink. The gorilla started to cry. Amelie stopped to go and see if the gorilla was ok. The gorilla stopped crying and Amelie said "Are you ok?"
"Yes I am," said the gorilla sadly.
"Do you want me to buy you a bicycle like mine?" said Amelie.
"oh yes please," said the gorilla happily.
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well done Abigayle that is great
ReplyDeleteHello Abigayle, thank you for entering this week's challenge! What a kind character you have created in Amelie. She not only stopped to see why the gorilla was crying but also offered to help. I liked the way you have used speech to make the story move along clearly, well done!
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