Wednesday 29 January 2014
Finlay's 100 word challenge
This week we had to include these words in our writing: grand, pink, gorilla, laughed and bicycle.
Today I went to the park and there were lots of lakes. When I went there, there was a mysterious cave with a bicycle and eyes looking out, which were like a candlelit green colour. Also, there was a big, fat nose poking out like a carrot. Then suddenly it pounced out of the cave. A gorilla. I was running as fast as my legs could take me. My mind was spinning, soon my legs were too. Minutes turning hours, seeds becoming flowers. Trapped. Dead end. Then I looked at the gorilla and a grand house. Then I laughed because the gorilla was dressed in pink, on a bicycle! When I laughed it scared it away!
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well done Finlay very good
ReplyDeleteI like your short, sharp sentences Finlay. They create an exciting atmosphere and allows the reader to experience the panicky feeling you have of the gorilla catching up to you. Mrs Tijou
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